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(original date: 1999-2000)
Your eyes are like a shining river that is reflected by the Full Moon;
Your voice when it sings is like a Bird Singing;
And when it talks, it talks with words of Wisdom;
Your Aroma is like the smell of a Rose;
Your kindness and gentleness makes me think that you are Sweet;
You’re dancing makes me think that you are Adorable and Fun to be Around With;
And while you stand alone in the night, I see you someone who is Funny, Sweet, Cute, Gentle, and Kind.

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S74rw4rd's picture

This is a beautiful poem,

This is a beautiful poem, although the first line made me stumble, as I cannot understand how a moon reflects a shining river.  The moon reflects sunlight, and perhaps the river shines with moonlight, but I cannot imagine the moon reflecting riverlight.  Can you explicate this for me?


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Moscadini's picture

Thank you & Moon

When the sun reflects the moon, the moon reflects on the river

S74rw4rd's picture

Wow, ok.

Wow, ok.


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poetvg's picture

a sweet and
memorable piece ;*)