Eye don't know

It is not in front of face

It's in face

 

In face confrontation

In face eyes sees them

 

Agreeable foreseeable

In face unbelievable

 

Believable

Conceivable

 

Receivable

 

In face eyes sees them

Relievable

 

 

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Starward's picture

This poem's very prominent,

This poem's very prominent, and deftly repeated, vowel sounds make it very musical.  Decades ago, I read some of the poet Ezra Pounds attempts to write like this, and I do believe you have used the device far more successfully than he did.


Starward

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allets's picture

In Person

Trying to remember what that's like. Eye to eye is best! Definitely "Relievable"  ~S~
 


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Morningglory's picture

I'm a big fan of eye to eye

I'm a big fan of eye to eye


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