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Perfection
such a word may make one die
make one want to cry
fluttering down
fluttering down into their melted plastic lives
a so called perfect creature
wasting away in your fake perfection
its all just lies
staring in the mirror
hated reflections
hated perceptions
cover up the flaws
o just better your complection
starving cuz they think its right
no such thing
distorted posters and magazines
it is not perfection
this is not perfection
perfect-such a word can be deceiving
such a word may make one cry
make one want to die
such a word does not exist
only in their plastic minds
in their plastic minds
it persists
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?