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I still touch myself there
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Stuff? of all the guys ive fucked and fucked over
you were the only charity case
and I placed my self in the position of beauty queen
and you the beast
I twisted you up in knots and played you so well
I turned you in to the finest cunt
and I find myself craving my own tricks less and more
the best thing i ever had
now you twist her up in knots
and I masturbate to
the thought of you
saying I love you
in that carpark
that beautiful night
when i let myself
believe in love
and even ruined
I pine for you
my finest creation
the product of my
cruel intensions
my damaged dark knight
who left his heart dripping in my hands
and tore my own out as it caught
its self on your realisation
that I am no woman
worthy of love.
Your use of metaphor to speak
Your use of metaphor to speak of the unspeakable is brilliant!
Starward
WOW! incredible poem! LOVE
WOW! incredible poem! LOVE THIS:
" dark knight
who left his heart dripping in my hands
and tore my own out as it caught
its self on your realisation
that I am no woman
worthy of love."
PERFECT ENDING TO THIS POEM! <3<3<3
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
THANK YOU SSMOOTHIEEEEEE!!!!
THANK YOU SSMOOTHIEEEEEE!!!! I knew, well I was hoping you would like this. Its a somewhat true story about a a guy I used to know. Some things you just can't take back hey. Pain is often passed on whether we are aware of it or not. Sometimes we look back and shudder! 20/20 vision... If i knew back then what I know now... Georgie Benson got it right!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Yes
hindsight is 20/20 - if I knew then what I know now, imagine what I WOULD know now! Nice write. Honest.