Author Information
Milk
Folder:
Stuff? I went out to get some milk at the corner store.
I saw some ducks cross the road
losing interest in my black bitter coffee cooling on the kitchen table
I followed the ducks as they found their way to the pond by the
saw mill shed. They waggled and waded in the water
sticking their bums in the air like a big "kiss this!"
I thought of you in the doorway as I left your
finger stuck in my face and my semi casual
"fuck you asshole! You're a disgrace!"
I lit a cigarette and watched for a while;
the ducks seemed so happy digging for worms.
oh well, fuck him! No use crying over spilt milk.
Still my favourite! You
Still my favourite! You opened me up to something new, I'll never forget it. Where the heck are you?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Im here. Thanks for the inbox
Im here. Thanks for the inbox how are you doing?
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Wow! Lots and lots of
Wow! Lots and lots of changes! :D loving it!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
this was so awesome! it the
this was so awesome! it the feelings flowed so easily to me it was almost like I'd already felt it all before...such an neat little package of emotion here.
Thanks MrPoofs
") I am glad you liked it though, I don't think it was all that good. Your encouragement is much appreciated ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Great poem!
I love the shift in focus! Great write and can't wait for more!
Really? Thank you kind Sir,
Actually, I was just writing as I was walking on my phone, it's not really poetry. But I hope I write much better ones ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
You are a writer and it is
You are a writer and this is poetic. There are some things you can do to smooth it out, but you were born with a poetic soul, so please don't keep it in chains ;-)
Thank you Beavis!
Bless your soul! ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
This is really great!!!
I love the twist and the way you run two themes together but separately the bad behaviour the f* yous and kiss this with of all things milk and ducks??? Wonderful write!!! I cant wait to see more!! Cheers SS!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hey SSMOOTHIE!!!!
I didn't see your comment till just now!!! THANK YOU!!!! HUGSS BACK! ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
You're most welcome to! ;)
You're most welcome to! ;) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I love this line! "sticking
I love this line!
"sticking their bums in the air like a big kiss this!"
I may put kiss this in " " might chnage how one reads the poem.
I forgot about the milk lol I was watching ducks and wondering why you two fought and filling in you with me and him with M and seeing myself watch ducks regretting swearing at the man I love. Then bang right milk we are getting milk.
thanks for the post
Much Love
Ashley
Thanks muchly
Ashley ")
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
:) NP love sorry I haven't
:) NP love
sorry I haven't been readong as much lately I have been extremely busy! :(
Much Love
Ashley
Profane Duck
Got milk? No. Duck watching is better for thinking. And the poem about before you left for the store? I wanna read that poem. You are fabulous - simply said is closest to the emotion (the profanity actually works) ~~ A~~
Wow I can't believe its been
Wow I can't believe its been 5 years since i wrote this!? Fucked him off ages ago. How life has changed. Im not sure i can write the same way. Thanks everyone for your support. X
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow