A Love Poem/ Forever After us

You make rainy beautiful, even when its pooring to drown, and you always take the morning from the sun, no matter how it paints the clouds. I want you forever, but i'll take what God will give, but i say forever, because i know i'll love you when your no longer here. To tell you how much i love you, id count the months and days just to tell you all the ways, a reason for every date. A Kiss for every second missed, a kiss for every tear that was shed, amd one before every parting, for life is a wilder. Ive seen to many unsaid goodbyes and unsaviory last words. So little words in that book, yet it wears the shelf so. But this, matter, time can't touch. I will love you forever after us.        

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I really liked it too!---not

I really liked it too!---not lame at all and you have really nice phrases in there. "You make rainy beautiful"...".a Kiss for every second missed"

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "