waiting

Do we make use of time or is time making use of us?

Is time made for waiting or are we just waiting for time?

Is time really so scary because we cannot keep it and only see it wasted like an open tap

Can we keep time in a bucket like we keep water..and re use it?

So what can I keep that is time and can be re used..is that love?

But like water, like time, like keeping... things can turn tasteless, sour or poisonous. 

Never keep but use wisely when abundant, use wisely while scarce, use wisely while available.

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allets's picture

Time & Love

What a great writing this is: "...So what can I keep that is time and can be re used...is that love..." I have absolutely fallen in live with this line of verse. Nice transition. Enjoyed - Encore! ~slc~

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miguelhongkong's picture

Thanks Star, I am so happy

Thanks Star, I am so happy someone would read and comment. Actually every poem I write has a real meaning and actual feeling. I thank you for making my day.