Solar Power (Rewrite)

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Divine Revelation

Oh God, you are

our only source of energy!



You are always available

when we’re running low on

the radiance that makes us yours.



Your supply does not diminish  

with the changing seasons;



Your work with us is not finished

until we’ve depleted our reasons

for living, for giving others

the vitality that arises from

Your Vitamin D(ivinity).



You are forever our constant:

the light when we’re bleak,

the might when we’re weak.



You are the power outlet

when life’s demands

exhaust our battery charge,

when the barrage of daily stress

makes it hard to even stand.



You are the force

that keeps us moving,

keeps us improving

our quality of life,

removing any deficiencies

of joy and peace.



You are the sunshine

that beckons the day;

You are the most divine~

the reviving light rays.



Our worlds should revolve

around only You,

because you are

the center of the universe.



We should evolve everyday

because you make us

new creations

when your light fills us

since the breaking of the dawn,

with morning’s final yawn.



You light our paths

even when the world

is in darkness:



when the enemy has hurled

every last temptation at us

and you have tested

our reliance on You,

we are still beautifully blessed.



Your sunbeams are meant to

be harnessed in our hearts

so we can be a light to others

and never depart

from Your perfect will for us.



We walk through life

with the sunburn of salvation;

our hearts burn for You.



Our skin has a heavenly glow

that only Your rays bestow,

but You also screen us

from the charring of pain

because your love rains.



Our hearts would freeze

without You shining on us.



So we stay on our knees

all the day through,

remembering your Son’s sacrifice

paid the dues

for our sinful natures,



since our grand departure

from the blinding light

of your infinite love for us.



You restore us daily,

filling us with light

when night’s influence

has faded away

and the gray turns to day.



We pray each daybreak  

that our circumstances won’t shake

our devotion to You.



For even in the wake of disaster,

You shine though!

Rewrite 2012

Oh God, you are
our only source of energy!

You are always available
when we’re running low on
the radiance that makes us yours.

Your supply does not diminish
with the changing seasons.

Your work with us is not finished
until we’ve depleted our reasons
for living, for giving others
the vitality that arises from
Your Vitamin D(ivinity).

You are forever our constant:
the light when we’re bleak,
the might when we’re weak.

You are the power outlet
when life’s demands
exhaust our battery charge,
when the barrage of daily stress
makes it hard to even stand.

You are the force
that keeps us moving,
keeps us improving
our quality of life,
removing any deficiencies
of joy and peace.

You are the sunshine
that beckons the day;
You are the most divine~
the reviving light rays.

Our world should revolve
around only You,
because you are
the center of the universe.

We should evolve everyday
because you make us
new creations
when your light fills us
since the breaking of dawn,
with morning’s final yawn.

You light our paths
even when the world
is in darkness:

when the enemy has hurled
every last temptation at us
and you have tested
our reliance on You,
we are still beautifully blessed.

Your sunbeams are meant to
be harnessed in our hearts
so we can be a light to others
and never depart
from Your perfect will for us.

We walk through life
with a sunburn of salvation;
our hearts burn for You.

Our skin has a heavenly glow
that only Your rays bestow,
but You also screen us
from the charring of pain
because your love rains.

Our hearts would freeze
without You shining on us.

So we stay on our knees
all the day through,
remembering your Son’s sacrifice
paid the dues
for our sinful natures,

since our grand departure
from the blinding beams
of your infinite love for us.

You restore us daily,
filling us with light
when night’s influence
has faded away,
and the gray turns to day.

We pray each daybreak
that our circumstances won’t shake
our devotion to You.

For even in the wake of disaster,
You shine though!

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ravenne's picture

Hi... by some coincidence, I had just posted a sonnet, right before you posted this, with a similar tribute to the sun. Much enjoyed your version. Thanks for sharing.