My Mind

I keep myself busy

to get my mind

off my own mind.

 

But soon chores 

and hobbies

are finished up.

 

At those times

the darkness 

starts closing in.  

 

Thoughts entangle

when I allow silence

to overpower me.

 

All the voices

lean negative 

and my mood shifts.

 

Better to keep

myself occupied 

than become woe.

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This poem demonstrates your

This poem demonstrates your usual verbal skill, but that first stanza---especially those words "to get my mind / off my own mind"---deserves to be in the quotation books.


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