Divine Revelation

Life is a stack of blocks,

each one representing a person.


So many people have been removed

that sometimes it feels 

like I might collapse.


And all these problems pile up,

that I feel like 

I might fall apart.


But you came along

and studied my tower.


You adjusted my pieces

so everything lined up perfectly. 

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WordSmith1's picture

True words

True.Our building blocks provide the foundation to our lives.Sometimes they are unstable and need reinforcing.The stronger they are the more stable your life

allets's picture

Surprise Ending

Nice - slc