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Daddy *PUBLISHED* in the ELEMENTS by Scars Publications(BOOK)
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Published Pieces Glass shatters
to the ground
children scream out
in horror
Another drunken rage.
How easily
a broom
can clear a wall
full of forced smiles.
that was brillaint just
that was brillaint just brillaint! reminds me of papa's waltz but so much better!
Much Love
Ashley
That glass is more like glass. Sharp, angry, reflective yet transparent. The line "to the ground", does it have more than one meaning? It could. I like it when line say more than one thing. some lines don't say anything. Maybe they aren't needed. Short effective and to the point. Your words are always sharp, going in one direction to one end. I like that. so many people can't focus their thoughts.
Melinda, very nice. In nine lines you communicate an entire childhood. Wonderful work. Ray