writers block

I watch in sadness as he rocks

to a tune I can not hear

His little eyes fixated on

things that aren't near



Dreaming of his laughter

Being carried by the passing breeze

But his happiness is locked inside

His pain I can not ease



Engrossing myself in his thoughts

of frogs and worms or fishing

Dreaming someday he will find that place

That for him I have been wishing



Is he thinking about bikes and trains

Is he saving his kingdom from a dragon

Is he happily splashing in puddles of mud

Is he pulling his favorite red wagon



Is he discovering in his mind

New things as old as time

Or are his thoughts so jumbled

He's lost somewhere inside

10/23/02

Author's Notes/Comments: 

still stuck on this poem...don't feel it's finished but nothing sounds right with it...sooooooo...don't ya just love writer's block?
;o)

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Peter Eichmiller's picture

Definately not finished. In more ways than one. The first time I read it I cried. Course I know who it is about, so it wasn't a cold reading in many ways. Work on it sometime. :)