FREE

I am free
thats how people see me
but i don't
i see myself locked up
inprisoned in my own home
having to be where mother can see me
and thats what they call free?
HA.. I would love them to see what it is like in my shoes,
almost grounded 24/7
im not a bad kid
im just going through a bad stage in my life
i'll get passed it though,
i always do
but untill then I'm not free,
just so you understand me...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

was it bad?? i'm not exactly Einstien when it comes to poems

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thisisme789's picture

Hey sissy! I like it. You

Hey sissy! I like it. You weren't kidding when you said that you write a little poetry ;P


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tonymoreno23's picture

I would say this is one of

I would say this is one of those poems you can look back at, and wish life were as easy as it was when you wrote it!
Good expressions- Keep writing!

Adam아담's picture

welcome to postpoems!

welcome to postpoems! sorry i wasnt around to help you when you needed yesterday. you have potential for poetry, please keep writing and posting! I'll read them.


Cheers,
Adam_San

thisisme789's picture

Thanks Adam! (for looking out

Thanks Adam! (for looking out for my lil sis) =)


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Adam아담's picture

ahhh, I see...

I wondered if you two were related.


Cheers,
Adam_San

thisisme789's picture

you did?

you did?


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