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It took One Day
One day
One year
One car
Three beers.
One driver
One red
One stop sign
Four dead.
One crying
One in pain
One praying
Two are lain.
One burned
One locked away
One girl
It all happened on
one day.
Very powerful poem. I like
Very powerful poem. I like how simple it is, but it has so much emotion. Nice Job.
thanks you guys, I don't know why I wrote it, but I just felt like I had to. I have more stuff coming from my pen everyday, not always finished though. I'm going to try to put my 73 song lyrics on here too, I'm also trying to put a band together, but all i have is a bassist and a drummer (i have to buy a drum set). But I'm trying.
Hey this is awesome.. I love ur stuff. It inspires me.
Ok...all i got to say is WOW! This one is amazing! Brillant! There is so much feeling on this...It's like i was watching the whole thing happen....WOW! Great Job!
have you ever tried everclear? its good shit.