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Death "The Test" 5 - 15 - 01
Battered and Bashed
tossed and turned
Wishing an end
to this hopeless world
Bruised and Broken
scarred and stoned
I so hate these feelings
I so hate this world
Sick and Tired
lonely and depressed
I so wish an end
to this gut-wrenching mess
Betrayed and Beaten
used and abused
I so hate these people
I so hate this world
so short and sweet
sour and cold
this life has been
a hurricane of hate
An end to this life
and end to this mess
I flunked this life
I have failed The Test
I like this one too :)
it flows well right to the end
I'm here again to argue with you yet again LL :o)~ you are very right in the fact that this can be a very cold world...and it seems to me those that are capable of the deepest feelings are hurt the most.....I KNOW I have been in the hurricane several times myself!.....but I cramming for the big test and I plan on acing that one!....and rest assured my friend we will never know whats on the other side of the hill till we get there.....you are so very talented ...you have a gift and ty for sharing ....... stay safe :o)
hey, i know how you feel, really i do, sometimes i get to feeling the same way, this poem is really good though!