Burning down the Void

Burned Bridges
empty spaces
a chaotic silence
remembering what life erases

Mountain tops to climb
Battling the hurdles in your mind
Stuck in a clouded hell
Breaking down the walls that repel

The writting on the walls
Transpiring messags in the stars
Creating Supernova's shaterring
The shallow eclipse of your mind

broken alighment
death defiance
when you feel trapt in a lie
light up the sky


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Burning down the void:


I think your poem is very dramatic and you express and describe well. I like your poem.