Wasted Garden

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: She runs and runs, forgets where she's going

: All she knows is she's sowing

: Seeds everlasting into fertile soil

: Grown with ceasless toil

: Into a garden oft' neglected

: Into a soil oft' rejected

: Now cared for in such haste

: And left as such a sad waste

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Stephen Di Fede's picture

Again; rhyme and flow are great. What i like the most is the mixed feeling of hope and despair i feel from this piece.