The Sun and The Moon

The sun may shine within
Her smile
But the moon may shine within
Her eyes.

The sun may reside in
Her heart
But the moon will reside in
Her soul.

The sun and the moon
May share
Her words
But her meaning
Belongs to the stars.

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Thank you!

Thank you so much, all if you! (:


-Lala

SSmoothie's picture

This is simply gorgeous, I

This is simply gorgeous, I love the juxtapositions and the way you draw the reader in with the puzzle only to leave them thing that there's so much more well written in many lights :) Ty SS


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poet610's picture

wow

wow this is a very passionate write. and i love how you enter the sun/moon and stars.
Great work very crative and deep piece
keeping penning
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