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Opened Eyes Closed Minds
Should I hide
because your eyes
are not pleased by my presence?
Should I not be,
for your
very own convenience?
Is it your eyes
that decide
what is beautiful to me?
Your vision is only a perception
with the deception
of thoughts forehand.
Surely,
you do not know of things
yet
to come.
How is it so
that you certainly
know
me?
Does my appearance
suggest
the total of me?
Of course not,
"I"
am within,
shielded
from your eyes alone.
My appearance
is your illusion
completely eluding you
from the total of me.
This is absolutely excellent! You are so right from first word to last. Read my piece called Recall The Childs Song and you will see we think pretty much alike. You have a profound piece here and I absolutely love it. Some might call it "heavey" but the message is truth and often others are not willing to accept it but it exists nonetheless. Outstanding,simply outstanding!!!!!!!!
good job...i like this poem