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Love Poems
rays reflect off clouds
another sunset shimmers
warm October night
on the grass beside the sea
a trace of you lingers still
rays reflect off clouds
another sunset shimmers
warm October night
on the grass beside the sea
a trace of you lingers still
Excellent job!
It's been a long time since I read a tanka. I'm no expert in these poems, but I certainly loved it! great word choice. strong meaning as well as purpose. flows great. I only wrote one poem in these gernes, and that is an haiku a long time ago. keep writing!
thank
thank you very much
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