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My Friends
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Friends Are these my friends?
It all depends
Are they cool?
Or am I a fool?
Maybe I'll never know,
But as long as their smiles show
I don't have to be shy
This I can't deny.
lovely
dedication
to your
freinds .
Here I think maybe the rhyming part wasn't such a good idea. You seemed to be groping for the words to fit the scheme and it drew attention away from the message. Aside from that, it was well written, crisp and concise.