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Time Flies

Tick tack, then ring, that’s the alarm yelling.
The world is calling
Come up and stretch out
The day is impatiently waiting.

Tick tack, make it quick, that’s the clock ticking
Time to start running
Hurry up and step up
The day is officially starting.

Tick tack, check it out, the day is almost ending
Your work needs finishing
Tidy up and pack-up
The sun wants to go in hiding.

Tick tack, tick tack, tick tacking
There are so much more coming
But wait, please STOP
You don’t need to keep on going and going and going…..

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Stop and smell the flowers.

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last updated 31 October 2012 - 4:23pm
©31 October 2012 - 4:01pm — Kikaykit
31 October 2012 - 10:25pm — emmenay
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QUITE TRUE

I agree with you. A poem which is well written: imaginative, descriptive and with a message of hope to several out there!

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

31 October 2012 - 4:10pm — GOHIL48
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good one :) loved it but it

good one :) loved it but it would be better if you had included some daily activities like work or studies.. :D

31 October 2012 - 4:25pm — Kikaykit
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There You Go

I revised it... thanks for your feedback. :) Incorporated part, where we are at work and need to finish up. :)

Kiks

31 October 2012 - 4:16pm — Kikaykit
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Thanks

Third stanza talks about finishing up the day at work. :) and i dont like so many words in my poem. Just wanna keep it simple. :)

Kiks

31 October 2012 - 4:17pm — Kikaykit
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on Second Thought

I will try to revise it so that i incorporate the part where we are at work or school. :) Thanks for your feedback.

Kiks