It's Its

Sometimes it's fits
Sometimes it's not it's it's its 
Sometimes its not it's nor its
Let's all drive to Esplanitz
It's a haul But I don't care
I'll drive my Volpi anywhere. 
Its gears may stick
Its lights may dim
It's got you sick
I'm on a whim. 
It's time to say goodbye right now
Its tires awful flat right now. 
 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

My first post here.  Never comprehended poetry but i'm trying to now that I started writing a novel.  First of all what is this?

1.Grammer Lesson Poetry
2.Not poetry at all 
3.Garbage
4.Awesome garbage 

Esplanitz is a town and Volpi is a automobile company in the world I'm creating.

Ideas, suggestions, critique and random comments are welcomed. 

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It's it

It tries to be itself

but it keeps turning up

as an its or it's

but it's not it. We

are sure of it

.

This is an interesting poem it's it's it v it's it (which says it all). See my how to write a novel in my prose section - if you are just starting out. Or not, it's for it or its, I never discriminate :D - slc