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Time gives truth
There were hurtful actions and dominating dreams
I was crawling under a self made demi God of some sort
I based my entire future on this desperate hope
I would do the extreme
I did in front of everyone
what I thought could not be done
Then we lost religion
One heart was breaking secretly
From that moment
mistrust and former dreams followed my every move
and disturbed the fragile balance
which I created for you
and only partly myself
Long time gone
forever lost
Again he was demanding relationship
while opening windows for me
to finally realize
that this love
this dream
could simply never be
sure, time counts and proves the truth as you mentioned for some one in your this sweet and very heart touching poem... what I like in your poetry is the reality based ideas.. well done..and thanks for sweet comments..hope the words feeding soul will never stop...best of luck dear friend
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?