The Lover

erotic pictures of in and out

leaving little room to doubt

the strong impression you have made

not allowed to languish and fade

sticky threads of sex

warp and weft designed to vex

light the way to where we've been

haunt the shift from sane to in

the only thing that's true?

weaving a web to capture you

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Donker Man's picture

WOW! A wonderful piece!

Teresa Jacobs's picture

Dear Karen, Hi! First poem of yours that I have read. I love it. Beautiful words. Teresa jacobs

Grey's picture

I like the last line. very... tight. shift from sane to in... yeah.. I might be "barrowing" that umm... idea... finally found your pages... muahhaaahh.. critique binge.