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Spring
Feel the
Vibrations wrapped in tomorrow
Glowing gold, pulsing, breathing
Through ice crystaled furrow
Hear the
Pops/cracks of ditch fires rise as
Smoke needles staunch the
Sick sweet wind off the silage
See the
Grey canvas of early Spring
Stroked by willow's bitter green
Weeping verdant tears
While silent geese take wing
nice pace and developement of tone. i like ... feel the hear the see the then you take me to a description of what to feel, what to hear, and what to see. keep up the good work. the piece keeps the individual going, and it leads the reader's thoughts exactly where you want them to go