Where Are You

Where are you?

Why haven't you been talking to me?

Are you afraid of what we might do?

I sure want to be close to you.

What could I do?

Love you till the end of the earth

Or marry you and stay forever?

What are you afraid of?

Where are you?

What are you doing?

I want to know

What's going on?

Are you scared of me

Do I frighten you?

Tell me the problem

And I'll try to fix it.

Am I too wierd

Should I watch what I say?

Am I going crazy

Or is it just me today?

Are you pushing me away

Should I figure out the message?

I don't know how

But I'll try to decode the message

I'll try to figure out

What you're trying to say

Please give me a sign

Of what you want me to do

Where are you

What are you doing

What should I do

Where are you and where am I???

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Where are you and where am I? You'll know who you are if you know what I'm talking about.

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Megan Louise's picture

Thise poem was written more freely I think and I'm not a big fan of the whole free verse thing. Some of the lines sound sort of awkward when you read them aloud, which is really the best way to judge how your own writing sounds. But again, you've done a good job of conveying your own feelings at the time that you wrote it.