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PIT... HOLES
life comes at us from out of the darkness
and at times we can sruggle to find
the curage to face it
when life comes rushing
at you from out of the darkness
who will you choose to face it with
will it be someone you trust
will they be wise
and will thier love for you
help them to guide you to the light
or will they lose thier way in the darkness
will they make noble choices
or will that person be somone untested
somone new...
life comes rushing at you
from out of the darkness
when it does
is there somone in your life you can count on
somone who will wach over you
when you stumble and fall
and in that moment
give you the srenght
to face your fears alone
The poem portrays
The poem portrays uncertainty through out its discourse; however there is a fight back element to the poem and a certain excitement to all the uncertainty. Liked your poem very much, hope you find that special someone to share life's unpredictability.
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