'06 On a Chocolate Sunday

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So many places to begin

on your smooth chocolate skin

a lick to the left then the right

savoring all that is ripe

slowly entering your halls

rubbing every inch of your walls

a center nibble on the top

sure does hit your spot

which causes you to pop.

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Jessica Amy LeBlanc's picture

I love how the ends of each line seem to bounce off of each other like a pin ball. It's similar to my poem called "Going Down" Check it out:
http://www.postpoems.com/cgi-bin/displaypoem.cgi?pid=81853

allets's picture

Spice Nice

Hot topics, thanks for the warning - I ignored it of course - Just love a good hot sack poem ~alelts~


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