'02 My Body in Love

-Some Kind of Love

The moment is just right,

we wrap each other tight.

I have felt this before.

I try to fight.

I just can't ignore.

You notice...

Ask me WHY?

Just holding your hand,

can make me nervous.

I can not understand.

My skin burns and perspires.

You touching me sets me on fire.

My body pours in moisture.

subdued murmur...

me being with you had been...

my...greatest desire.

© David Joel Rodriguez

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Carolina Hinojosa's picture

I like the way that you make desire a functioning part of your feelings. The persperation part was great. You would think that desire would be innate, but it truly is an emotion that causes all the other emotions and senses to be aroused. Awesome!

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