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Behind the word,

The wordless.



Behind the sound,

Silence.



Behind a heartbeat,

T i m e

        

f  a        ts

  r   g   e

        m   n



And disappears. . . .


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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Valhjim
17 March 2012 - 3:05am — SSmoothie
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fragments... very

very clever and wise. SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

17 March 2012 - 1:33pm — Valhjim
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Thanks!

Thank you so much for your comment!

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Edwin Robinette (not verified)
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Cute one Jim! Love the way you did "fragments", very cool! Way to go!!

17 March 2012 - 1:34pm — Valhjim
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Thanks!

I am glad you liked the poem and lwrote a comment. Thank you!

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — andshedied
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incredible...

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — EVE SMITH (not verified)
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I think this is a unique way of writing. Keep up the good work.