Conversations of Elegant Madness

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Early 20s

Conversations of elegant madness
Erupting from within
The ebb and flow
Of our energies as they move
Through one another
Across distances
Within moments
All with the anticipation
That soon enough these
Energies will become
Intertwined
Until one can no longer
Be distinguished
From the other

Conversations of elegant madness
Pour out of us
Speaking words
Understood by only the other
Inside our own
Private fairy tale world
Where the boundaries of
Good & bad
Right & wrong
Pleasure & pain
Love & control
Magic & lunacy
Are ever skewed
And ever changing
And barely noticeable

Conversations of elegant madness
Spinning in my head
Leaving me dizzy
And feeling euphoric
With graceless style

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written May 2012

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SSmoothie's picture

awwww!

Simply pure envy, white were these words when I needed them? Gorgeous write! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

Beautifully and maddeningly wonderfully written!

I love this too! Awsome work!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

Fallen_Cloud's picture

Beautiful

The imagery you create here is very vivid. You can feel the depth of emotions while reading the poem.

palewingedpoetess's picture

I Agree with Ashes......

This is just beautiful. beautifully writ and beautifully constructed. Bravo Jezzabel.............

ashes_theartofburning's picture

O.o

I really like this ..
Excuse me .. I really Loved this!
The title is genius.
The writing exceptionally descriptive.
Awesome job!
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo