the good girl........

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the good girl has started to disapear

now i have found someone to condem my fears



a new sensation i have started to feel

the wind the air none of its real

with you life is an everlasting rollercoaster

not knowing if your gunna go up or down

but still i enjoy the adventure and the fact that im breaking the rules

being the good girl until u,the bad girl turns up

the buzz...so wonderfly weird to words that cannot explain

but in my head the buzz isnt off the cocain

its off knowing that im with you

but im confused your a girl who im attracted to

alcohol the wonderful drink

has helped me alot, it has stopped me to think

about the break ups, the fights, the sleepless nights

there all in the past and now she is in the present but is she in the future?

i hear those words i long to hear

"your my best friend i love you my dear"



not everyone understands how i feel when im with her

they call me a druggy and an alcoholic whore

but the only reason why i do this is because thats what she wants

if i carry on maybe shell think of me in over ways

the way that i think of her



my life stone struct

heart beating faster than ever

the kiss she placed apon my lips so delicate like a feather

maybe its true maybe she does love me

could we ever be?

how i long for that second kiss

i really do love u miss

i dont know how long this half life will end

but all she wants from me is a little friend

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ok iv been reading alot of fuck up teen books so yeh lol...........

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Lara Edwards's picture

i hate to do it but i'll correct your spelling if you wish not to seem like a smart ass first of all i like how the two poems interlink in the start...cocain...structured...thats it spelling wise on this piece thats incorrect...but this poem is ever so sad...and heartbreaking too....