Hey, Jane

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Hey, Jane, you taught we never need a cross

To get to heaven or to go across

We sing Taylor's old country tunes

Yet you also like '22'

 

Oh, Jane, I like the fact that you don't judge

Even though I've gone way too far and much

But what I like about you the most is

How you make a smile with your tender lips

 

I remember that post-test walk

A lot of things went to our  talk

About that boy's common game

Know that his name rhymes with shame

 

I like the fact that you like green

You tell the things that you will feel

I hope you won't love that cheat

'Cause when girls cry, he does feast

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

"HEY, JANE" is a poem dedicated for my friend in college.

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...even though I've gone way

...even though I've gone way too far and much...wow - the imagery is fine in this phrase. To say it originally, differently, creatively is the poet's quest. I like that you are writing so much and far ~~A~~


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Thank you for reading this

Thank you for reading this poem :)