Virgin Suicide

She runs the blade across her wrist,
Wondering if she'll get her wish,
All alone she's in tears,
Hears the ringing in her ears,
Waiting for her life to end,
She feels the anger that's within,
I watch the blood run down her arm
It give me such alarm,
I'm just her imaginary friend,
If she dies my life will end,
I touch her shoulder she starts to weep,
The cut has went to deep,
I turn away from her,
I turn away from her,
she cries out don't leave me,
Another friend that deceives me,
I call out for her mom,
But she's passed out on the lawn,
I call out for her dad,
But he's been very bad,
She trusted the wrong man,
She trusted Damian,
If God would only take her in,
But what an awful sin,
Suddenly she pushes away,
By her side I'll have to stay,
I try to give her air,
All that's left is despair,
I start to fade away,
What a horrible day,
By her side I will stay,
Until I fade away......

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Seraphim's picture

This is very good... and

This is very good... and exactly what I don't want to go through. The danger seems to be over now. The only difference is that I'm real, but perhaps almost as helpless sometimes. Keep writing


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Afzal Shauq's picture

its really a gooood poem...love to read it and i went through your other poems and inspired alot...and will be doing comments on other tooo...hope you go through my poems to be a good poetess friend ...hope you be good friend ever I got

Amanda Holland's picture

good poem. i wrote something similar about a person who is so alone he made up an imaginary friend to deal with his problems. and it's told from the view of the imaginary friend, similart to yours. it's called existence if you ever want to read it.

Elronvae Kelly's picture

wow..reading this..it made me remember my friend for bosnia..shes been planning to kill herself i dont know for how long..and i cant do anything about it..shes in rehab now cos of her eating disorder..i miss her so much..shes gonna be there for 2 months..and its only been days and im missing her already...