Proposal

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When i see you smile

My heart drops

I was never good with words

There were always far too many

Last night I wrote you a poem

but I threw it away

Nobody wants to know

that we're gay

But if I could take you to the place you belong

I'd say the words and sweep you along

I'd kiss you over an altar

I'd kiss you over an altar

I'd kiss you over an altar


 

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Starward's picture

This is beautiful.

This is beautiful.


Starward

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SSmoothie's picture

Beautiful! I really think the

Beautiful! I really think the repetition at the end really works! Well done! 


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allets's picture

Why Untitled

How about: Gay Proposal. Never throw poems away. It's a rule :D