They always follow...

I swim through the tranquil sea

Creating a path of ripples in my wake

At night is when I come up, when I can be free

As the day is threatening, for my secret’s sake

On land, I’m just another random girl

Living about life, in tune with the flow

But underwater is where my beauty will unfurl

Maybe you can see too? All you must do is follow

But be careful, dear human, for I’m not all I seem 

You might get carried away with this rare underwater beauty

Don’t dwell here too long, no matter how much you are keen

Oh, please stop, crunching your way across the floor to me

For are you so blind you can’t see the white remains

Of your fellow mortals, on whom you stand upon

All of whom fell for my merciless games

Ah, there it is, your look of fear

As what I say hits you in the face

As I become a monster wearing a sneer

As you try to get away in haste

But, alas, you fail, and I grip you tight

You scream, but no one can hear, anyways, you’re too late

Your face, so beautiful with terror, enveloped in the night

And you slowly sink to rest with the others who shared your watery fate

 
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a.griffiths57's picture

    An alluring poem with a

 

 

An alluring poem with a deadly dark end. Enjoyed this read very much, although fantasy, well written and I liked the mermaid's gile.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

nightlight1220's picture

There are some who could not

There are some who could not survive without fantasy. That is what I got from this write. Well, it's also put together nicely. Happy mermaiding!~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

iwonderwho's picture

thank you! yes, that's quite

thank you! yes, that's quite true. i think maybe i might be one of them.....

my mermaiding is always happy....maybe sometime you could join me? lol

nightlight1220's picture

If I ever feel the need to

If I ever feel the need to run away I will join you!! I maybe just like reality too much...I always did. It's hard to be something I know I'm not. ('if only i didn't like life so much...' (?) *confused look*)---no, really, we all have our own ways of coping with things. I can accept others' ways and love them just the way they are---even if they are different. o_O 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Experience of the ocean/sea

Sorry for the long comment !! Please ignore if you don't agree.Above all, plz dn't waste valuable time reading this trash

 

Experience of the ocean/sea ?

The unfathomable depths

Blue , calm , beneath

Tranquility beneath the rough waves

The froth of the frail,toiling human

Calm,deep soul lying sleeping

I wonderwho how deep ur thots are

You have laid most people's wisdom bare !!

 

Wonderful deep writing IWH

too deep for me to fathom .

The mystery of the ocean depths

.... Lost continents... etc etc.

 

 


©bishu 

 

iwonderwho's picture

thanks!

i like long comments, though! and i'm sure it's worth something reading it, if you wrote it! 

i think like 95% of the ocean is still unexplored. or something like that. rough waves at the top, but who knows what lies beneath? (i hope there are other mermaids around...)

:) thank you for your wonderful comment

DarkLight's picture

This is kind of crepy, but it

This is kind of crepy, but it is good!



iwonderwho's picture

lol, thanks :)

lol, thanks :)