Will I Ever Find It

                   Something                                    I’m still

                  Looking for                                which seems

                 Like it can’t be                      found. No sign of

                it anywhere I look                 a dead end at each

                final turn. Will I ever         find it, will I ever feel

                what the others feel?        Will I ever deem to be

                 worthy of it, or am I stuck trudging through the

                  dirt that is called “life”, alone and looked over,

                   as if I’m camouflaged in with the ground? Is

                     it just because I’m one of the few, unlucky

                       ones that can’t find it? Was this how my

                          life was supposed to go? Is there still

                            a way I can change my path, or is

                               the damage already final? Will

                                    I ever find anyone who

                                        will at least try to

                                        give me what the

                                            others call

                                              “ love”

                                                  ?

                                                  

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Love yourself first then

 

 

Love yourself first then other people, even simultaneously. Hope you find your self love and love.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

nightlight1220's picture

Maybe many others have been

Maybe many others have been to this place you so eloquently express in this beautiful and honest piece of work? Maybe place more effort in loving yourself? 

 

~peace~

............


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

iwonderwho's picture

:)

thank you. :)

hmmm, so focus on loving myself first, and then love others? i did love myself once upon a time, but i guess the others' words just got to me. but i can still climb back up. i'm already halfway there. 

SSmoothie's picture

Love is something you give,

Love is something you give, not getl

thats the beauty of its generous nature 

sometimes we ignore the love around us because it isn't the type we want 

but oh I'll tell you love is something that comes back to you but, never from the source you expect the universe has its own plan. Go with it a heart like yours won't ever be Lonely for long,

and if you lose the parameters that define love with in reason it will come home to nest,

loved your shapely poem, 

lovely! Hugss 

 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

iwonderwho's picture

gasp. maybe that's why i

gasp. maybe that's why i can't find it? because i can't give it? i'm glad that you said that. and maybe it is somewhere, maybe I'm the one who unconsciously camouflaged it in with something else! wise words, thank you. 

 

SSmoothie's picture

;)

;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

Painstaking to draw a heart

Painstaking to draw a heart and discuss someone of your dreams. Good geometry iwonderwho.


©bishu 

 

iwonderwho's picture

thanks! :)

thanks! :)