You're Beautiful



 You're beautiful, please don't ever forget that

 If you perservere, in the end you'll win

 The other girls made fun of you for being "fat"?

 Forget them, not everyone can be sickly thin

 Don't let them bother you, don't let them make you cry

 They aren't worth a bit of your precious time

What they say about you is far from true, they lie

 Lies so vicious they should be a crime

 Their words are hurtful, I know, I've been there too

 In time you'll learn how to let their words slide off

 But until then, your body shouldn't have to pay for what they do

 Your braveness against those girls will pay off

 They'll see how strong you are, then they'll stop

 They wont be able to break through your walls

 And by that time, you'll be on the top

 At least above them, deaf to their calls

 Don't pick your self apart because of what they say

 Just let yourself grow, your chest isn't forever flat

 Do forget their words, just bat them away

 You're beautiful, please don't ever forget that









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nightlight1220's picture

That's a really encouraging

That's a really encouraging poem, and then the ending is nice because it takes the focus and brings it back to the reader in a very loving comment.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


iwonderwho's picture

thanks <3  didn't even notice

thanks <3 

didn't even notice what the ending did there! thanks for pointing that out :)

a.griffiths57's picture



Wonderful and encouraging advice for those who are being bullied. How thoughtful, instead of just wallowing in the unecessary misery such attacks bring. Your poem here is powerfully positive, I thought a good read and well written.

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:) thank you, i try

:) thank you, i try