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The Show.
This is the show where all can see
All of the beauty and the city,
Where people are sincere, always happy, and such
Nothing bothers them because they don’t care much.
Yeah I guess that’s cool whatever they say.
Am I the only one that wonders why they’re that way?
If being cool is that “hip”
Then society should go get a grip,
Yeah sure there are some people who show who they are
Behind the mask there is a person who’s socially scarred
Back on the mask it goes,
Influenced and gave into the words of the “foes”
But I guess I’m a hypocrite because I really don’t care
And I’m ready to let go...
Reach out for my hand and let’s prepare for the show.
You are not alone... perhaps
You are not alone...
perhaps only alone in that you feel you are,
Life and love come with struggles,
and strength and courage are made
from the smiles that accept that fact of life and love.
There are times the weight is too heavy.
That is when we break inside
and the smile becomes a frown...
But alas! A smile is a frown upside down...
It is about honoring individuality
and unique love essence in each person
on the face of the Earth,
to be in harmony with the universe,
As One.
~peace~
Nice poem!!!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Much Appreciated
Thanks, your comment meant a lot. :) Beautifully said! Have a great day. ^.^
Salut
I really like the twist in the plot! Tough you could make more out of it if you worked on the rythm. My favorite part really is the ending.... pretty good! And also keep up the skating, it's a lost art ;)
Thanks :)
Thank you! I greatly appreciate your advice. Although I've found it hard for myself to transitions out of the A B A B rhyme scheme >.< I'll try to work on it though :) And definately! It's nice to get out and just cruise around with friends. Anyways thanks again. Cheers~
Nice Early Writing
"...nothin bothers them because they don't care much" - that sums up a lot of people, but not you who write this down. Nice world - evil world - mediocre world - we live in all of those and move besides - nice penning, ideas folded in nicely. Encore ~Allets
Gratified~
Yes you're right! I care a little bit too much at times honestly. Staying optimistic is my advantage and I'm more than happy to use it in my defense. ^.^ That probably tells some about me as a person haha Poetry is a way for me to express the emotions that I'd rather not. :) Thank you so much for your comment and I hope you have a wonderful day. ^.^