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In The Blank Spaces
The folders are stacked as high as you are tall,
A monument not yet worthy of you
Filled to bursting.
Each manilla leaf cradles inept dedications
and
heartfelt scrawls.
Not even my best writing does you any justice...
The words for your fragrant energies have not been devised yet.
I struggle to find the phonics or ideology to encompass you.
By your name there are many others
By your mesmorising presence there is but one
Thus, your name does you no service.
Exquisite being
embraced by an unfathomable beauty
Infinitely facinating essence,
a halo upon a halo,
Nothing shines brighter
or brings me to life.
Yet paradoxically,
I sit back carving ideas of you with nothing but a pen
And a deep sense of inadequacy.
You are more than any fathomable words.
An unwritten language,
You are better described in the blank spaces
Yet to be penned.
The verbal skill in this poem
The verbal skill in this poem is exquisitely deployed; a beautifuland powerful evocation.
Starward
Wow! I just read this! How
Wow! I just read this! How did I miss it? Exquisite where are you? I need to dive into your universe and delve into your atmosphere x hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Deep
humble,talented.
im following you.
let the ink flow,Koko~
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Again koko many thanks
Again Kokopoet, many thanks
this is great
i often find words fail me, that saying nothing at all is more adequate, yet my inner being wants to cry out. magnificent
Thank you very much. Yes the
Thank you very much. Yes the blank spaces hold all the potential in the world but as soon as we fill them we limit them into some sort of mold.
Enjoyed
Good write, love the reach for the right words. - Stella - xoxox
Ah, will they ever come?
Ah, will they ever come? Perhaps we must invent a few.
Wow
I think what makes this so powerful is that most of us understand it...people can't be written down. loved "carving ideas of you," vivid and painful in a good way!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Yes the essence, charisma,
Yes the essence, charisma, and experience of that person is not something you capture with words.
"Je ne sais quoi"