"confidence"

  

    scattering the dreams of new rise,come to  me

            to be your chief guest ,

               and to take you ....

                   to a new world with the confidence

    of a bastard rock,that can float in water...........

    

         the fragrance of flower will say the story of

              butterflies with the quest of sweet scent.......

Author's Notes/Comments: 

confidence is simply
       confidence......

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Just Call Me Harper's picture

It was written beautifully, however I felt emotionally detached. I wasn't able to grasp anything. Not only was this poem incomplete, but there seemed to be nothing of substance. Just beautiful words and clever thoughts. Try to build around this. Think really hard and I'm sure you can do it.

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TRUE BEAUTY