Chloe

 

She whispers,"they're beautiful", so innociently

And traced the marks

The queen of hearts 

Smiled coyly 

I faced the card, met her hand

And struggled for the words

"You miss outside?"

She met my eyes

It hurts to look at hers

She shakes her head

A smile threats

Worthy of the queens

Her sleeves fall

Like words best left unsaid 

Theres wounds best left unseen

Her expression hardens

And quickly softens

"There's nothing left out there for me"

She fold her hand

I look to her, hesitantly

"You can still stop"

My voice wavers

"Addictions hard to beat"

She looks afar 

Still tracing scars

"But then who would I be?"

 

 © All works  Victoria Embree 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For my roommate from a stay at a mental hospital, opened my eyes to the corrupt mental health system.  It was after I realized that such a facility is rarely helping...just doesn't want to be liable for your suicide.  I was threatened with a extended stay if I ever needed help again... Thank you Chloe, I hope you found who you were. 

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Once I knew, and once I

Once I knew, and once I deeply loved, someone like this.  Your poem summoned her back from my memory. 


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A poem very near and dear to

A poem very near and dear to me, I am so happy it resonates with you!


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Going on an Incompl marathon,

Going on an Incompl marathon, haha. I'm not going to leave very many more comments...just know that I love everything you write and I hope the feelings you let out here are not everything you feel, just an outlet, like writing is for me <3


 


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I can't write it if I haven't lived it.

Thank you so much! I am so humbled by your words, truly. I find little time to write now but I am always reading in my spare time. It means the world to me that even a single line I could write would  touch you! Stay gold. 


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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thank you, I really

Thank you, I really appreciate it. (:


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I Worked In Mental Health Six Years

Like the health care system-hospitals/physician groups/nursing homes - all are in trouble because of the war costs and security of homeland and the new matrix for keeping bombs from taking out people and buildings. Someone in government forgot the people again and what they need from tax dollars. Not corrupt, broke - Stella


 

 

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I do not think corrupt was

I do not think corrupt was the right word...I can definitely understand that and completely agree that we haven't the funding we need. I was treated very poorly. A few years later and some perspective and I realize not everyone has the heart to work in mental health...


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