mouth

Peered down your gullet 

and it was lit up like fairy lights 

I was staring into the abyss 

you hid from me for 7 years

when I had ambitions 

you swallowed them whole 

when I had reservations 

you ate them up

God how I teetered on the edge 

of your sharp teeth 

staring into a void

as large as your faulting smile 

on the edge of all our yesterday’s

I was precariously perched 

on your lips 

and you whispered 

give me a kiss

 

 

 

 

 

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S74rw4rd's picture

Another beautiful poem, I am

Another beautiful poem, I am becoming a fan as I read these.


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patriciajj's picture

Absolutely brilliant. I am in

Absolutely brilliant. I am in awe of the skillful way you expressed what I have felt myself, but never formulated such a striking and memorable commentary on it. True art. So sorry it has taken me so long to reply to your beautiful comments on my work. I'm honored to be recognized by such a talented poet.

allets's picture

Cool Tats!

I want a dog too. :D cool write - slc