carnival

cataclysm in reflections 

my self is 

composed of funhouse mirrors 

my words get lost in themselves 

I roll them around in my mouth like jawbreakers 

spit them out 

and colors swirl 

merry go round memories 

screaming laughter 

dumb and dizzy   

and nausea 

a sudden violent upheaval 

 

 

 

 

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patriciajj's picture

Amazing. This is metaphorical

Amazing. This is metaphorical magic that takes us into your inner self, the beautiful hurricane that is your genius. My respect. 

zebrablack's picture

You dont have to be a mans

You dont have to be a mans muse; just as well a womans and why not?

I hoped you dont mind a suggestion

 

my self is 

 

composed of funhouse mirrors 


to: myself, a composition of fun house mirrors


The "is" in my opinion is akward English 

 


Incompl's picture

Ha. Everything I write is

Ha. Everything I write is awkward English. In reference to my profile, its all tongue in cheek. 


Let your teeth show

allets's picture

For Me

It would be Bumper Car memories - I love those and go-carts. Yes! Fun write with roller coaster nausea included. :D  - slc


 

 

Incompl's picture

I don't drive, Lady A!  thank

I don't drive, Lady A! Tongue Out thank you!!


Let your teeth show