Gone Glow

Dying ember

I've nothing left to sacrifice

Watching you die

This must be what God feels like

I'm the one who gave you life

Your birth came from my want

From my chattering teeth

I'm searching for some water

Keep my mind from misery

I'm gonna smother you

My flame

Cold coals

I'd rather freeze than kill you again 


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deepinyourdreams's picture

I liked the dying ember

I liked the dying ember story'


Incompl's picture


Why thank you! (And for stopping by)

Let your teeth show

allets's picture

Doused Love


A love or friendship gone off, the attitude is putting out the flames. Nice metaphor - rather be cold and freeze than rekindle old embers, Nice ~Star~




Incompl's picture

You always so eloquently

You always so eloquently describe my troubles, shining star. Thank you for the read and smile :)

Let your teeth show