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Pluto in the Garden
Darling of Hades
Fireflies creed
Dip in the water
8 little seeds
Sweetheart of Hades
Fair as can be
Peek over the stones
What do you see?
Flower of Hades
Flames beckon you close
Dancing in torment
Too late to oppose
Angel of Hades
Missing the shore
Necklace of shells
A burden you wore
Beloved of Hades
Picked from the earth
Stood with a man
Absent of mirth
Jewell of Hades
Through crystal window
Crying for Mother
Cursing Pluto
Wife of Hades
Sense of beauty, indeed
Gave up the garden
For 8 little seeds
Nice rhyme, I even followed a
Nice rhyme, I even followed a story'
"Deepinyourdreams"
I generally have a hard time
I generally have a hard time getting through rhyme poetry, almost as much as I dislike pomegranates. However, you have a knack for keeping the reader’s attention. I love Persephone, and I loved reading this piece you wrote. I have not seen much rhyme poetry on postpoems that can compete with this type of finesse. Nice job.
I rarely write strict rhyming
I rarely write strict rhyming schemes like this anymore, but I thought for such a classic story it would be fitting. Persephone is my favorite myth and I loved playing with multiple versions when writing this. Thank you so much for the kind words, I really enjoy your poetry, both enchanting and romantic.
Let your teeth show
Enchanting Write
the rhymes almost vanish - enjoyed the telling ~Lady A~
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