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Pearls in your mouth
Sapphires in your head
Rubies on your cheeks
Pretty opal skin
Gold frames
your precious face
But your insides
have left me jaded
Pearls in your mouth
Sapphires in your head
Rubies on your cheeks
Pretty opal skin
Gold frames
your precious face
But your insides
have left me jaded
cleverly depicted'
cleverly depicted'
"Deepinyourdreams"
Great Write The eloquence and
Great Write
The eloquence and juxtaposition
of the last line reminds me of one
of my own pieces, metamorphosis,
Keep it up!
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
Lover of your work
I enjoyed Metamorphosis, timeless message but yours explained even further that beauty can be hidden, waiting to emerge! Thank you for your time!
Let your teeth show
OUCH!
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All that glitters falls and pays homage to the last line of this poem - rant like and wonderful to read and smile at ~
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As always your comment left
As always your comment left ME smiling! Thanks Lady A.
Let your teeth show