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Screams of abuse,
When you walk through the door.
Home twenty minutes late,
You must be a whore!
Can't do anything right,
He will always find the wrong.
Fight, then make up
It's a classic love song!
Lacking the strength,
You had once prior.
He's burned all your dreams,
Your every desire!
Soul stripped of love,
Your empty inside.
Why are you with him?
Swallow your pride!
Isolated from family,
Friends don't exist.
This love was cursed
From the very first kiss!
Second guessing oneself,
Not knowing whats right.
Agreeing with him,
Just to extinguish the fight!
The burden of proof hey my
The burden of proof hey my dear?
I must love him to go out with him against patents and friends wishes..
They don't know him like you do...
Only they do, they can see him coming a mile away...
It you have prove otherwise...
You can't be wrong,
You gave you only prize over to him
For a few empty promises
You must be right
You have to prove them wrong
Or else they are right
And you're a whore!
Should have listened before
He took your reputation
And ran!
Bravo if only
ALL GIRLS
Thought they were the one thing worth waiting for!
Great write!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ssmoothie, you know it all so
Ssmoothie, you know it all so well! I wish i could take all your wisdom and life experiences, to help me with my current messy situation!! Haha..
But i must, use my own little brain i guess. But what happens when your just stuck in a stuation so messy you almost find your self settling for something less then you deserve?
Thankyou for your wise feedback, i always look forward to see what you have to say!!
Best wishes, Skye :)
Sounds like a relationship I
Sounds like a relationship I was in once. I; was a terrible boyfriend... She hates me. It's understandable and I will not ever blame her at all for anything including her feelings. I've learned alot; seen my mistake. She wont forgive me though, I hope one day she will as I have her. Another fantastic poem. Your message is not unheard.
Wow! I have never been lucky
Wow! I have never been lucky enough to meet a real man willing to accept the fact that he has made mistakes in his past!! I hope that one day you can recieve the forgivness you crave from her..
And i really hope the 'boy' i wrote this about, one day becomes a real man like yourself and finally does come to realise his mistakes, before he destroys the beautiful womans soul he is more then lucky to have present in his life.
Thankyou for you feedback and thank you even more for shsring your experience.
More then appreciated:)
Best wishes,
Skye:)
thank-you!
I really appreciate hearing that! Yeah it was a difficult lesson, I hope your partner learns it as well; I can smile now :) youre not alone in Lifes challenges.
sroty of almost every teenage
sroty of almost every teenage girl, and thats sad for our socity.. you write beautifully.. :)
Yes, it very sad to see the
Yes, it very sad to see the young girls of our age be tricked and deceived into
Believing this is true love! But the message will hopefully get right out there
Soon enough!!
And thankyou so much, i didn't expect someone
to say that to me I really appreciate it:):)
Cages Inside Prisons
With locks self-manufactured
and bars of a material no one
will ever breakm we walk
around in our cells
like cats stalking prey
only there is no prey.
.
We are our own jailors
shouting at the moon for release
for a hero to come and unlock
that which has been locked
too long.
.
Each morning we rise
wondering why we stay here
with that big hole in the cinder blocks
behind the cot with all the
fresh air coming our way.
.
~~A~~
03-13-13
11:45p