Not Titled (s.o.c.)

There was nothing there

And so it started

On the day

My sense departed

But not my senses

They held fast

Feeling feelings

So intense as

Twould be to

Light a fire

in your hair

shine the spotlight

and just stare

stare at something

in despair



(my head is not on fire but my heart is

on fire cause you are a burning ball of

beauty and i dont know what to say)



though intrigued

I could not move

Until the words

had spilled from you

my surprise

it was quite thorough

your hair was tied

your brow was furrowed

begging of me

whats my name

in my heart

you lit a flame

flaming words

of my own came



(my head is not on fire but my heart is

on fire cause you are a burning ball of

beauty and i dont know what to say)



like a door

had just been opened

I spoke and

You listened

Your eyes twinkled

Your lips glistened

All the while

Feigning interest

In what it was

I had to say

You could have told me

Go away

But you thought

That I should stay



(my nose was broke when you slammed

the door you opened in my face when i

tried to walk through it to you, why?)



That's what haunts me

to this day

nothing but

the evil way

that you passed al of your

gross disgust

off as something

more than trust

sinister dreamings

in an inkling

of a thought

back and forth

you must have fought

in the end

twas all for naught



(my nose was broken when you shut

the door you opened in my face when i

tried to walk through it to you, why?)



yes you wrenched

my wretched heart

your intention

from the start?

Could’ve been

Ill never know

Maybe not

But maybe so

Probably I'll never see

I'll forever

Have this doubt

This want to know

What twas all about

This need to figure

Your mind out



(my heart isnt broken yet but i dont

think you're finished with it yet so

let me know when i can get it back)



A pure need for

Simple closure

Else I may not

Keep composure

And if you see

What you have done

Then I have lost

And you have won

I have lost

And you have won



(you burned my heart like you

burned my *** and i cant quite

walk right cause the char marks)


Author's Notes/Comments: 

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andshedied's picture

my god.. i really like it. i have no critiques. only a comment. an amazing song. your words seem made for paper.

Jessica Amy LeBlanc's picture

oh yeah and I love the part about her being a ball of burning beauty... it sounds hypnotizing.. the title should be based on that somehow maybe..

Jessica Amy LeBlanc's picture

Interesting song... sorta has the same theme as one I wrote... "Tell me Why the Water Ripples"... seems like your poems a all angst towards women who have apparently stabbed you in the back..